Try a bee-related Haiku

[Firegazer]

There should be 3 lines, with roughly 5, 7, 5 syllables in them. It should have some sort of seasonal reference. It should conjure up an image of beauty or tragedy.

Here's my first attempt for starters:

The bee lands gently.
Low sun glows through pollen grains,
as she works away.


Let's have some!

FG

 

[TBRNoTB]

There should be 3 lines, with roughly 5, 7, 5 syllables in them. It should have some sort of seasonal reference. It should conjure up an image of beauty or tragedy.

Here's my first attempt for starters:

The bee lands gently.
Low sun glows through pollen grains,
as she works away.


Let's have some!

FG

Pollen packed upon her legs,
Food for a growing brood,
Swallows on the wing,
Will I make it home?