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Firegazer 

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There should be 3 lines, with roughly 5, 7, 5 syllables in them. It should have some sort of seasonal reference. It should conjure up an image of beauty or tragedy.

Here's my first attempt for starters:

The bee lands gently.
Low sun glows through pollen grains,
as she works away.


Let's have some!

FG
 

TBRNoTB 

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7: 1 KTBH . 3 14x12 , 1 Long fondationless 14x12 + 2 Nat +some empty ones :(
There should be 3 lines, with roughly 5, 7, 5 syllables in them. It should have some sort of seasonal reference. It should conjure up an image of beauty or tragedy.

Here's my first attempt for starters:

The bee lands gently.
Low sun glows through pollen grains,
as she works away.


Let's have some!

FG
Pollen packed upon her legs,
Food for a growing brood,
Swallows on the wing,
Will I make it home?
 
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